iight...

Dixie... a wasnt feelin it man... you had some iight punches in there... but it was mainly filler!!! conversations from AOL... hmm... wierd battle technique... messin wiv all that bolding, underlining, quoting and all that shit really did mess up your structure... which means it was hard to read the damn thing... and therfore screwed your flow... AND... most of us can tell where the end of a line is... no need for /... they screw it up aswell... wasnt feelin that at all man... not bad... but u really did mess this up wiv the quotes n shit...

Meters... iight... from the start... it jus looks better than Dixie's verse... it looks like it should be in a battle and not open mic... flow was on for you boy... structure was decent... ive never liked the whole puttin things in brackets thing... but a was feelin your verse more than Dixie's...

Quotables

Dixie...

"He fall short by inches in battles,like he tripped over the tape measure/
Knowledge is gold..but when there's a X on your head you be lackin' the treasure/"

Meters...

"But how the fuck am I gonna diss you fag, this ain’t a fair bout
Cuz that excuse for a verse just took the words from my mouth!"

Vote - Meters...

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