taktik- a very compelling piece indeed. You went deeply into your relationship with each member of your family. You had a load of solid wordplay, dope than most I've seen recently. I didn't patricularly like the father verse, but then, its come to the point that i hate piece where the main cahracter commits suicide at the end because its so played out. But you had an amazing piece.

kiisiick- It seemed like you intentionally dragged it out, when you could have said most of what you said in about, two verses. The ending was solid, and the beginning was solid, but the middle just seemed to kind of lag. Try to think "this is what I want to say, this is how I'm gonna say it" and don't go on forever about everything. Good piece though, better than I was expecting.

v/Taktik

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