walter-you had amazingly solid wordplay in this. very dope in that perspective. but on the otherhand, you didn't seem to get any point across at all...just sort of wrote...know what I mean? The bars were a little long, the flow was hard to catch.

key low- cool concept with the computer stuff, but it really didn't cut it for this. I think you could have gone way more indepth, but I also find it amusing that you wrote all this right after your computer crashed LoL.

v/walter wall

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