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Old 01-27-04, 11:51 PM   #9
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Well...Av:::

Your verse was...good

Well...Aus:::

Your verse was...good


But! Aus' closer killed the countdown....

But Av's opener killed the other opener...or is that the other way around....

Man...wait, are you sure they're both not Av...I mean..all those aliases?






J/p:

Really though:
Av...your verse got broke down pretty well by Walter, I don't understand why your lines go from make me laugh to make me cry....it's like reading a soap opera....

Aus...pretty solid, but lots of your lines could have been worded into actual punches
you were more or less just making statments in my opinion (not every line)....

Liked:
-while I'm at it you should fear... bullets'll fly through this queer,
n' fuck Hershey drinks... cause faggot it'll be YooHoo dies here...-

-And Aus' closer the most-


I'm pretty sure you can both do better

Overall...Av's punches came stronger throughout...Aus had a nice drop but like I said...
lots of it seemed like it could have been worded just a little better

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