Lirael got this with better punches..although people said his shit was played I didint see any that were..they all were good from beginning to end..I liked the Archelogist line the best..among others..I give your verse a 8.6/10

Word..you also had some real nice punches but some of them was kind of corny..but you were good..you put up a good battle..you had some lines that was really stretched but other wise that..I will give you a 7.9/10

my vote goes to L.O. for better punches..check out my battle between me and dirtyendzone..