this shit was too hot i haven't been onrapp battles for awhile so i haven't seen some of your better shit but if this isn't better than ya otha shit then i can't give you any advise ya lines were hot nice little punchlines in there and also was able to read it and see the flow so there's nothin you can do to this tomake it better my final approach is this shit was on point

odd gives
5 of 5 mics

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shut the fuck up

even if i stutter i'll still sh-sh-shit on you/ pun

dead in middle of little of little italy
little did we know that we riddle
some middle man who didn't do ditally/ pun