Alright man, nothing personal but you need to get your lines and everything set up so that people can read them and understand them better, check out some of the other posts on here and you'll see what I mean. And if you use more complex words it will make your flow better and give you a better chance to come up with something clever, I know this cause that's what I'm trying to learn how to do right now also. Other than that just keep working at it.