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Old 01-28-04, 08:01 AM   #3
oddly ill
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truth be told this was aight i mean there really wasn't a topic but the flow made up for that. like the man above me said you need to jump up your vocab and a little bit on the punchlines but other than that this was a nice read keep doin ya thing

odd gives it
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shut the fuck up

even if i stutter i'll still sh-sh-shit on you/ pun

dead in middle of little of little italy
little did we know that we riddle
some middle man who didn't do ditally/ pun
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