technician ya gonna need ya best-wishin, even then ya'll still end-up missin
i'll bury ya in the ocean, but ya still won't have any-flow in my vision
ya just a hoe in addition, meanin ya suck twice as bad as me
battle fast emcee-fuck 30? i'll make you a three minute casualty
you think you nice, cuz you got 20 KO's that's Krab Openers
they say technicians are good with their hands, you just jack off allot
mann why'd you even challenge, and say that you would set it?
i culd of won with madevils verse, but didn't wanna get the devil offended
to hell and back, tech's gonan get smacked for bein stupid
feedin the abusive, and like his birthday-he'll put the bleedin to uses
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opener was whack,finished strong though 8/10
nice werdplay in this as you can see,easy all around flow
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I see u fixed ur structure, good, it still cant match even with mine
It's like u a fish, my punches are bait & u lookin to catch lines
I beat u once by a landslide, & i'll do it again wit the back hand side....
Lets go to a carnival of skill sights, Cut's like Gary Coleman & demands rides
See u just a ho, & everyone kno, u ride more dick than real hookers blow
If I look below, I see cutastraphe been already knocked out once five to O
So why is the rematch set, is he really that concerened in me abusin his neck?....
Is he losin' his head?shit ... battlin Tech is the easiest way to lose ur respect
Look at all those multies & big words you've used, wow kid u must be proud
But soons as I dropped this verse u hard work became nothin but a shrou
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struc was off just a tad but this hit way harder
nice creativity and way better attempt at striving for something
good punches and witty personals, 9/10
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vote/tech
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hit this up i need one vote to close it
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