A creative approach..
& especially for a first topical it's nice.
Good vocabulairy, metaphors a few..
All that was needed, is there, to make a good topical.
Some mentionable quotables..

Subject matter expressed, in realitys context is everywhere
From subliminal advertising..... to Kazaa's god damn spyware

Of all i like this the most, fresh & 'breakin out' of the standard imagery.

Alot of potential.