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Old 01-28-04, 10:27 AM   #9
LyRiCaL GeEnUs
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technician ya gonna need ya best-wishin, even then ya'll still end-up missin
i'll bury ya in the ocean, but ya still won't have any-flow in my vision
weak multi, second line..ehh coulda been better
ya just a hoe in addition, meanin ya suck twice as bad as me
battle fast emcee-fuck 30? i'll make you a three minute casualty
played to all hell
you think you nice, cuz you got 20 KO's that's Krab Openers
they say technicians are good with their hands, you just jack off allot
doesn't rhyme, and all sex/jack off shit is mad played
mann why'd you even challenge, and say that you would set it?
i culd of won with madevils verse, but didn't wanna get the devil offended
lil stretched, but not bad actually
to hell and back, tech's gonan get smacked for bein stupid
feedin the abusive, and like his birthday-he'll put the bleedin to uses
ok, kinda creative

I see u fixed ur structure, good, it still cant match even with mine
It's like u a fish, my punches are bait & u lookin to catch lines
kinda played, but not bad
I beat u once by a landslide, & i'll do it again wit the back hand side....
Lets go to a carnival of skill sights, Cut's like Gary Coleman & demands rides
ehhh kinda crap and filler...nah filler and crap
See u just a ho, & everyone kno, u ride more dick than real hookers blow
If I look below, I see cutastraphe been already knocked out once five to O
ok personals at the end, but the first line is played
So why is the rematch set, is he really that concerened in me abusin his neck?....
Is he losin' his head?shit ... battlin Tech is the easiest way to lose ur respect
ok, not great
Look at all those multies & big words you've used, wow kid u must be proud
But soons as I dropped this verse u hard work became nothin but a shrou
ok finisher, nothin great

Damn Tech you took it easy, you still won tho, a few ok punches and personals, nothin great. Cut your elevatin I can see. Keep at it man, try and stay away from sex and gay lines, cause those are mad played

Please drop an honest vote here guys. Thanks
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