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Old 01-28-04, 10:41 AM   #9
LyRiCaL GeEnUs
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From: GhEtTo
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This kids been laughed at ever since he made-his-verse
‘Him creating the link’ is the only time his ‘name-is-first’
played to all hell man
I called u out cause I wanted an easy win, why would u test-veterans?
‘I’ll call u ill’ only because ‘I find laughter to be the best-medicine’
YOu aint a vet firstly, second line is good
‘Bone spitter’? this kids gay he wants to grow up to be a ‘male Jenna-Jamieson’
Your lyrics are awful kid, shit even newbies find it be betta-plain-then-him
played
I’m ‘multi tasking’ while writing this verse, jus to show not much-is-needed
You’re a ‘femcee you fag‘, ‘unlike many men’ this kids will ‘blush-when-heated’
refrain from using your own name. Gay shit is played
I’m gonna kill this kid easily, your nothing, shit I can even leave thunder-shook’
Being stepped on’ is the only time this fag is ‘under-stood’
Heard the thunder line before, ok second line

Listen to this CAT, its crazy but i'll call u up like pussy
check out under multi..you aint a vet ya still a newbie
played first line, ok personals in second
im laughin hystericaly, yo favorite actor is Ron Jeremy
my lines are short and plain?yo verse is plain and shitty
kinda whack, and doesn't rhyme
I cant beleive this kid, what you thought id know show
yo lines dint rhyme nor flow, your drop aint worth a KO
ehh ok I guess
you must be the one gay fan,cause commin in you blow
your mom n dad disowned ya,why?yo tried to rape yo bro
kinda creative but still played a bit
fuck this bitch im done with you this aint somthing false i won its true
your whole lifes gone downhill, your slidding and still dont have a clue
not bad

Bone takes this, he had some ok punches and personals. Multi came with some played lines. Keep elevatin man, yall be dope sumday.

Please take the time to hit this up with honest votes guys. I took the time here
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110084
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