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Old 01-28-04, 11:24 AM   #20
LyRiCaL GeEnUs
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Quit-hidding...Your who crew is accussed of dick-riding+
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109746
Better quit-writing...Ur 'seen as pussy' like clit-spying+
I thought that was Dynasty Soldiers, oh well, kinda played
'Jerkin dicks in prison' is da only way a 'beatin-a-guy'+
U'll probably back out this battle...Retreating-is-wise+
fo real, get rid of the +s, second line is nice, first is played
Ur conceeded-with-lies, think U can handle someone-of-my-stature?+
I'll continue to pierce your chest until lungs-are-raptured+
nice, multi too
Want me to Ghost write for ya? U'll probably post-the-verse-backwards+
Im Killin ya crews foundation, like a leg that's completely factured+
ehhh... kinda weak
Dynasty soldiers suck 'erect dicks' to make them 'stand at attention'+
Merke Me? Ur plan is suspended, Ur wak never to have a hand in decisions+
ok, not great, but decent

Antonio wins this, he had a more original verse with nicer punches and personals. Nota a badd battle, but theres always room for improvement.

Please drop an honest vote here guys, I took the time for yall http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110310

I know ya been anxious for this slaughter to commence,
but id put five on ya verse and it still wouldn't make sense,
doesnt rhyme, weak...
look at ya crew dog, ill B2K and merk ya whole entire squad,
sweep the streetz and put you prostitutes out of a fuckin job,
played sex shit again
count ya teeth now so you can find em all when im through,
cause im takin ya whole grill out like niggas at barbeque's,
heard that one sumwhere befo, ok
i could let you key infinite lines and blaze ya wit one,
cause ya chances of winnin' are less than second to none,
very played
now the streetz ain't sayin to much of shit no more,
cause dicks in they mouth's stoppin em from settlin the score,
yawn...played
Ill spit my shit on ya face so ya can see my words clearly,
and have you cower down, provin now that ya fear me.
weak attempt
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