--[Flow]---
Flow here was smooth, you had some dope internals, especially within the first few lines:
"From the age of 9 I was confined to the art of school
Just I naïve kid, dreaming, but blind to everything cruel
Just another fool, immature, thinking I knew my route
Misguided through the years by a corrupted institute" - really shone through, showed your talent and ability to rhyme fluently.

--[Vocab]--
Vocab was pretty good, very consistant...you didn' suddenly launch into an attack of 12 syllable words..you spread the shit out evenly, and kept the simplistic words and rhymes to a minimum..dope!

--[Concept]--
Liked where you were coming from here, it oculd be said that this topic is played out...but to be honest it's near on impossible to come up with a totally orignal concept..big props on this aspect, you came out well, put your point across and kept me intruiged and wanting to read on.

--[Overall]--
This was certainly one of your better pieces, think you reall excelled in your vocab/wordplay and flow..was off-the-hook...4/5..keep this shit up..will look forward to reading more of this type of quality of material!