^ you were no help at all

expand on your lines.. add metas to make them more complex and try different set ups on how you approch the punch. add in personals and you could cut your lines down a bit...work on ya rhyme scheme and dont rhyme the simplest words.... like wack and black, if the people know what word your goin to rhyme it with its played, and i figured wack pretty easy. Read some battles in the LLL and you will catch on.

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