Thread: Lyric v. .snap.
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Old 01-28-04, 12:06 PM   #3
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Snap

Ima knock your dick so far in u can call it a clit/
so sit, and realize this new presentation I spit/
Not really a punch....blah opening
I may be new to rappin and rhymes, but crack open the Times/
and notice ".snap.", front page, dazzlin minds!/
diss him..not everyone else....meh
Lyric's shit is over-played, like rainbow hair-do's/
the only time you 'get involved' is watching Blues Clues!/
lmao...played and dumb...nice try though
Just admit that your rappin intelligence is oh so artificial/
This niggah blows more men then a referee blows his whistle!/
so-so..ya best punch yet
Its time ta delete this weak elite piece of meat/
superglue his seat and beat this meak lyric~al creat(ure)/
You called him weak and elite at the same time, wak ending wit the creat(ure)


Lyric



Told ya neck I was battlin ya and it was like 'snap!'
You a fake emcee made up of whackness and crap
ok opening
Your call stated that you'd waste any who replied
Your anutha kid from Cali, but I doubt your rep West Side
not really a punch at all
Like a drive-by with spit balls, your rap brings no force
You a wannbe textee, from writin ya voice gets hoarse
punch was blah... 1st line was better then 2nd
My punches all connect, while you gave a decent try
But you must be in the Airforce son, ya punches did fly-bys
you say drive by before, now flyby, this was jsut so-so
Nothin you threw hit and ya verse is completly played
The best punch ya ever threw was..uh...your..um.gay
decent closer

Overall - both verses were very weak but lyric did take this, keep elevating guys
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