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Old 01-28-04, 12:56 PM   #8
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ok decent battle here...nothing spitacular but none the less
its was aight


Gazeebo...i did like the multis n shit but alot were forced and not needed..
punches were a bit played....and so is your style..structure was off and flow fell
in some areas...a lot of your punches would have hit harder if worded better..and
your verse had a lot of filler too..focus on your oponent not yourself..it hurts your verse

wicked...actually came pretty decent.i like the flow and structure was on point...
some punches were blah..while others stood out in some cases...
overall you had the better verse..and was more creative..

favorite line of battle goes to wicked

I’m the king with no crown, that nothin’ is harming
Your verse is like a clock with no sound...nothin’ alarming!

cracked a smile here..not bad...

anyway
v/w1cked
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