Fanta



I'm a murder this newbie wannabe emcee, he tells me he's dope .. i disagree
Smack him back down to his knees like a Nun hammered on Hennessey
Decent opening..not to bad, dont need allt he multis though
Praying to God, just what he needs to survive ZeE's killing spree
Illness shooting from my mouth he'll be choking like he smoking da weed
so-so hit, coulda been better
Through a Macdonalds straw, so stoned he can't see, hear or read
He'll never suceed! My rhymes exceed the vertical limit!
Even the deaf and blind WITHOUT the use of Braille will be able to 'feel it'
wow.. ya rhyme 2 lines not 3
Look at him shitting himself, dude, i do this for fun, follow FanTa's advice
On day you'll be outsmartin someone! You feel you been outdone?
I'm so far ahead of you.. I'm gone..Look in my rearveiw, laugh at you trying to run
wow.. again wit the 2 lines rhyming and the 1 left alone wit no buddy
I roll faster than Biggie in a barrel down hip hop hill;it aint hard to see i have more skill
Will to kill, Rhymes too in, shit, their off the scale,
Another pass for Fanta, this doushebag earned himself a fail...
Blah


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I got a blind spit yo, on this bitch ass 'femcee'//
Ten lines to defeat ya? I can do that while a bitch blows me//
Wack opening
Whats up with the RB name 'Fanta zee'?//
I swear to GOD yo, Fanta is a GOD DAMN DRINK!!//
no rhyme at all
So like I do the drink, I'm swallow u up, all I 'Can'//
I'm STILL tryin' to figure out if yous a ho or a damn man!//
wack again
Tupac's your idol, now he is a dope emcee//
So who da hell you tryin' to be?//
Not a punch
Why you dying to live, when I'm livin to make you die?
If you want me to kill you, I'd love to be THAT guy.//
Blah closer

Overall = Fanta took this obviously with his harder punches.. he fell off towards the end but his start was enough to take this

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