sorry this has been slept on, you did me a great favour closing that battle and i'm a repay you for it, i felt the flow really kicked in from the first stanza, and you carried it through until the very last line, the second stanza was my favourite, not because of the ideas, which were amazing, but mostly because of the way it sounded when i read it aloud..It gelled...amazing, you have real talent..

if you wanna, check out 'Darren' in open mic, its on the first page, near to the top