iight... im not even gon break the verses down cuz Y.Y.Y's would be impossible

Yo - work on ya struct and rhyme scheme, i suggest you visit Wackness Emergancy Center and get some tips. your punches were alright but flow and struct was horrible.

D - ya struct was alright, you dont need the """ around the words and // after ya lines. you had some ok punches and they took this battle

my vote - D

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