This was ight.. nothin really nice.. alot of just basic gun talk..
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Originally Posted by Plague603
thats means my foes gettin chewed up like gum drops
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this was the only line that was coo.. ya flow is here and there.. maybe you should work on that.. the 1st 4lines were coo.. then you started to fall off.. and just was basic suff from there on..
but keep up the work..