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Old 01-28-04, 02:48 PM   #7
LyRiCaL GeEnUs
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This kid ain't ill, far from fresh, in fact motherfuckin stale...
And with that pussy, bitch soundin name I doubt he's even male.
ehh weak and kinda played with the pussy part
Profile says he's 14, how sweet that he busts raps at school...
Cept being so young he can only cop flow, in his wading pool.
Nice punch and personal
Fool! Wearin floaties cuz even in shallow water he'd drown...
So ta shut him up I'll bring tha lead, and have him pipe down.
decent, not great
Cuz his mind skipped out, fuckin left, causin disaster in his rhyme...
Since his brain went on vacation, his whackness is workin overtime.
creative and a good punch
So please explain why ya here, ya ain't a killer like Myers, Michael...
Ya can't rhyme or rap, more useless than ashtrays on motorcycles
ehh ok
And now ya been beat, so humiliation blossoms and grows...
Cuz if talent were fuckin nitro, then Ill couldn't blow his nose.
pretty good closer


a 'redneck', born to kill for his food, but thats past-now...
this kid 'bends over' and touches his toes to be cracked-out...
played and whack
there is no beef, but i am goin to merk him in vein...
a 'HEADhunter'?(his occupation)ha ha, theres no need to explain...
Oh but there is, you had to explain ya punch which is no good
he is an old fart on the web, age 3 to the 4...
this battle is an easy bet, lets see, its me and the whore...
blah...whack...and you said fart
he has his signature all wrong, the truth has been bent...
after 5 five is when he 'grips the mic', the merkin begins...(sick)
Dun tell me whats sick. lol Decent
no wants to here about your life, so stop panicking...
your rhymes couldnt make you a 'penny' if you were anfernee(hardaway)...
ok
no get that constipated look off of your face spit it out...
this bitch couldnt 'eat up emcees' if he was eatin them out...(shit)
yeah it was shit. Whack and played

BTK takes this battle. His punches hit harder and he had stronger personals and metas. He aslo was creative which is a plus. Ill is a newb, didn't know what he was gettin into. Stilla good spit for a beginer

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