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Old 01-28-04, 02:50 PM   #8
Antonio Banderas
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This kid ain't ill, far from fresh, in fact motherfuckin stale...
And with that pussy, bitch soundin name I doubt he's even male.
Good opener

Profile says he's 14, how sweet that he busts raps at school...
Cept being so young he can only cop flow, in his wading pool.
Nice

Fool! Wearin floaties cuz even in shallow water he'd drown...
So ta shut him up I'll bring tha lead, and have him pipe down.
Good consistency

Cuz his mind skipped out, fuckin left, causin disaster in his rhyme...
Since his brain went on vacation, his whackness is workin overtime.
----DOPE ------

So please explain why ya here, ya ain't a killer like Myers, Michael...
Ya can't rhyme or rap, more useless than ashtrays on motorcycles
---DOPE---

And now ya been beat, so humiliation blossoms and grows...
Cuz if talent were fuckin nitro, then Ill couldn't blow his nose.
okay ender, not the best but OKAY__________________
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a 'redneck', born to kill for his food, but thats past-now...
this kid 'bends over' and touches his toes to be cracked-out...
GOOD opener, seems forced

there is no beef, but i am goin to merk him in vein...
a 'HEADhunter'?(his occupation)ha ha, theres no need to explain...
WAK....

he is an old fart on the web, age 3 to the 4...
this battle is an easy bet, lets see, its me and the whore...
Very elementary

he has his signature all wrong, the truth has been bent...
after 5 five is when he 'grips the mic', the merkin begins...(sick)
----DOPE---

no wants to here about your life, so stop panicking...
your rhymes couldnt make you a 'penny' if you were anfernee(hardaway)...
Doesnt rhyme right

no get that constipated look off of your face spit it out...
this bitch couldnt 'eat up emcees' if he was eatin them out...(shit)
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Flow - TIE (Both maintained a steady flow in their verses)
Punches - Born to Kill had the better punches...
Creativity - Born to Kill used a wide range of vocab to increase his creativity
Worplay - TIE
Multies -??? Not Sure.....
Structure - Born to KIll had the better structure

I vote Born to KIll....


Hit these battles up:
Battle Verses Quelude
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109584

Battle Verses Killa Kid
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109803
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