aight gentlemen, nice battle, nice battle. MC AINES, a soft start, but you definately came through with nice flow, and great punches. Punches enough to knock this challenger out. AKA, your verse has a definate ring of inexperience. It is, at best, simple, lacking punches, and unexciting flow. Now i never hated anyone a day in my life, and i won't start here. All you need perhaps, is a further study of hip hop, lyrics-wise, of some greats. Study flow patterns, formats, lines, metaphors. And come back more elite. There is potential in most people, and i wouldn't doubt that you have that as well. But MC AINES got it though.

A middle weight effort from a heavyweight lyricist,
keep at it...

and also vote on mine please
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