Btk

This kid ain't ill, far from fresh, in fact motherfuckin stale...
And with that pussy, bitch soundin name I doubt he's even male.
Decent opening...ok wordplay in the first line
Profile says he's 14, how sweet that he busts raps at school...
Cept being so young he can only cop flow, in his wading pool.
Good hit
Fool! Wearin floaties cuz even in shallow water he'd drown...
So ta shut him up I'll bring tha lead, and have him pipe down.
another good punch...
Cuz his mind skipped out, fuckin left, causin disaster in his rhyme...
Since his brain went on vacation, his whackness is workin overtime.
Creative punch...nice
So please explain why ya here, ya ain't a killer like Myers, Michael...
Ya can't rhyme or rap, more useless than ashtrays on motorcycles
Ehh...not really feelin this, good try
And now ya been beat, so humiliation blossoms and grows...
Cuz if talent were fuckin nitro, then Ill couldn't blow his nose.
Creative and a good closer


Ill-Fresh

a 'redneck', born to kill for his food, but thats past-now...
this kid 'bends over' and touches his toes to be cracked-out...
Blah...not feelin it
there is no beef, but i am goin to merk him in vein...
a 'HEADhunter'?(his occupation)ha ha, theres no need to explain...
what? not direct punch and personal was shit
he is an old fart on the web, age 3 to the 4...
this battle is an easy bet, lets see, its me and the whore...
blah again... just cuz u 14 dont mean 34 is old kiddo
he has his signature all wrong, the truth has been bent...
after 5 five is when he 'grips the mic', the merkin begins...(sick)
No not that sick actually...decent i guess
no wants to here about your life, so stop panicking...
your rhymes couldnt make you a 'penny' if you were anfernee(hardaway)...
Kinda played... ok hit
no get that constipated look off of your face spit it out...
this bitch couldnt 'eat up emcees' if he was eatin them out...(shit)
Blah closer

Overall - BTK obviously took this wit his harder more complex punches... btw how many wins u got now btk, you get 100 yet?

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