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Old 01-28-04, 03:43 PM   #7
KISI
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excellent flow on the both of you. UR HEAR hit us up with consistent word play
...and get to stretchin ya torso longer than rookie bars and your check in...You wish you could recycle lines, but your rhymes are all garbage.....
very nice.
I like the speed of it. It seems like it might have a certain west coast like quickness to it. The flow was nice.
Killer emcee got the luxury second, but was unable to make a solid attack. Which is not to say it wasn't a nice verse. It just shows a noticeable room for improvement. But hey it's twenty minutes so. He had a nice opener that was ready to keep our attention. And the rest of the verse did, but it didn't have that effectiveness to it enough to wow me. So i give this one to U R Hear. Great efforts on both people though.



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