Hear

ill start by injectin pain into ya midsection
and get to stretchin ya torso longer than rookie bars and your check in
decent personal, even though ya line ^^ was really stretched
With a hip throw, ill hit ya wit quick blows
Im like Moses partin the sea the way I rip flows
not a bad punch.. average FL
this bitch knows.. whos iller your hardly a killer
From my parent's room? even they would clown you, like Ben Stiller
blah.. played...
your goal is to spit a filler, with no power to harness
You wish you could recycle lines, but your rhymes are all garbage
creative
you get neglected, throwin up more signs than a deaf crip
and ill snatch ya necklace so fast itll leave ya neck less
you said neck less twice, not feelin it


Kill

Dis kid banged into a parked car n' claimed a "hit n' run"
For every weak punch u throw...i throw a harder..for each one
coulda re-wored this and made it much better
But i wuldnt have 2 throw any...cuz u got none
so keep on da look out 4 mah punches...stay shun
what... wack
"say it dun spray it"..cus ya mouth iz doin all da "spitting"
u swing like a "high blind man"..ya punches aint hittin
decent punch.. not bad
like a hacker i go into ur system ..n delete ur cookiez...
but dis kid only has one item- yall look at dese rookiez!
not really direct and hard hitting
But afta im through wit u...ya cookiez will be "clear"
I have now oficially erased the memory of "U R Hear"
ok closing


Overall - Here took this, his punches were harder and more complex.

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