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Old 01-28-04, 04:47 PM   #120
j-dilla
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This is sad, this kid needs to extend his vocabulary, see...
Bodily fluids and wack ass rhymes just dont cut it.
"take poosies" oopsies, i think he needed shit to rhyme NewBs.
No match so lets "rap" about cum, piss, and shit.
Your the worst emcee, Im practically embarassed for you,
You must be new, you have no crew, Mondo Thugs impeached you.
Lets call us the "Mondo Thugs" because we want to be Bone
Quotin' AFI on RB with no talent shown, hell what does this look like Rolling Stone?
We quote the Source, 106, and XXL.
Lookin' at what you write I feel my head start to swell.
Sickened sorrow, wow thats what your rhymes do to me.
If i saw you id make sure you were the one bleeding from YOUR face from my knee
Cause im sickened, im practically pleading while proceeding to finish this wack rhyme that you left me to follow.
Your rhyme has nothing going for it, your writting is just hollow.
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J-Dilla.

"Due process, payin these dues, battlin crews
At the same time, livin in life, givin enlightenment
Seeing eye for the blind
Through the darkness of the industry we ministry"
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