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Old 01-28-04, 04:57 PM   #9
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Gazeebo threw a good, flowing verse...

But alot of punches were softened by all those multi's...

I keep seeing it over and over again...

It's really fuckin hard to have a multi-ridden punchline...

The set ups, ok, yeah...

But when the punchline is multi'ed up...

I swear, 99 outta 100 times, it's weak as shit.

That was the problem here.
That and the stretched lines...

So, forget about multi-ing your opponenet to death...

Work on setups and punches.

Wicked was short and sweet, structure and flow on mark...
(and he didn't need scores of multi's to do it)

Plus, he got personal on ya, always helps.

Tight wordplay, really, he just killed this.

Peace
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