opener/closer- smiley

his structure, punch, and personal just outclassed kilo's

flow/structure- smiley

in the opener and closer kilo's structure slipped.... but smiley's flowed sickly with the cactus-matress-actress area, and the multis gave smiley the edge

punches/personals- smiley

kilo had some alright ones, but smiley's personals just hit alot harder... and that line about stever urkels glasses just overshadowed kilos several decent punches

vote- smiley

not a bad verse kilo, you might want to consider putting multis in ur verses... in text it helps alot


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