^ every vote against he calls it a dick-ride... moron... heres my breakdown:

punches - killer: connected with a few more than hear...

multis - hear: killer had none that i saw...

opener / closer - killer: if u would of re-worded ur opener it would of been better...

structure - killer: read it easier

flow - hear: easier to go with

nice job both... posting random, be happy...

vote - killer