just for aesthetics sake, please spells word correctly...it helps me read it with the intended flow rather than have to go back and decipher what your saying.

A few times in this the flow was going very nice, easily with a beat...but it swtiched up too many time... you need to stay consitent with the flow and how many syllabuls you keep between the rhymes.

The wordplay was rather basic, but i had to chuckle at the MJ line...clever!!

Sit down and just vibe with the beat for like 10 minutes then see about rewriting this.. the flow will be there

hope this helped, and thanx for feed on mine