Sup man.......first I think your rhyme was rather basic.....i must say I'm more of an emotional writer than a lyricists so I won't say shit about you not using any complex shit......I could relate to some things which made me agree with a lot of what you said....which kept my interest....I'm not sure if your a newbor not but I see you doing great things.....you can only elevate. Remember that.......keep yourself in the pad.....an hit me up anytime.....if you have time read my Day & Night Pt. 2. An thanks.....I hope to see your improvement in times to come.....hit me up anytime if you need help wit anything.....peace