yall want a vote well here's one....
!!!WORK ON STRUCTURE BOTH OF YOU!!!
ok da run down
opener: Se7en... both was ok, but se7en's flowed better.. and a lil easier to read
closer: Beats... Seems like se7en fell off twords da end
punches: both.. both had some real good punches.. and some real lame ones.... bothe kinda fell off at parts.
structure: Se7en... much easier to read than beats..
Overall it wasn't too bad.. just try to keep da intensity goin through da whole verse.. both...
Vote: Se7en
for better punches and structure
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