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Old 01-28-04, 06:48 PM   #11
Straight Ace
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My knife will split ya deep skin hanging out like fins/
My mac will have ya ass getting low like those ying yang twins/
Ok..ok..i saw it coming..
My gun will have you twitching like a tick/
My Defining of Illness means you make me sick/
Dope!..well not really more like its opposite
Fuckin wit me you must be drunk drunk drunk/
My ak will make you like b2k go bump bump bump/
Like celestial said, its been done..& in the exact same form too
Really homie wit these rhymes im bout to choke you/
Fuck that since you a herb I guess im gon have to smoke you/
Nahhh..get creative.
I don't know why you think im the kid you should test/
Aww I know why you mad P.M.S and im not talking bout no private message/
For you..this was great..nice how u flipped a old concept

Harlem's Finest

Just noticed your remark.. realistically, its laughable at best
You'll be gaining from this battle herb.. post traumatic stress
Ok.. not a real good opener but ok.
With those poor attempts at punches you've just admitted defeat
Herb's been drawing more blanks than a hardcore scrabble cheat
Fresh..good
I'm similar to bridges.. you're fucked once you cross my path
Injecting humour in my verse with ya site link.. it made me laugh
Attempt at personal, ok
Ya references are prehistoric son.. basically every bars a bore
Making me the only known meat eater.. thats also be a herbivore
Witty..ok
Not much is needed to merk you.. this whole battles a lark
Ya bars been passed round so many times...
.... they're fronting trade marks
Nice closer..

So overall the decision is easy..
Harlem takes this in every aspect & catagory u could think of..
Just a more elevated verse..vote Harlem