Ok, Here's the Breakdown:

McBeats - I see a lot of potential here... witty wordplay, decent punches, only thing you lacked was ill personals. The set up of your punches could be better.. but hey, the verse was an enjoyable read and you showed a lot of skill. nice drop props

Se7en - some potential here too, but still in need of development. You have the right ideas, just have to carry them through with more thought and punch harder. Some of your stuff was too basic, but it was nevertheless a decent read. You can see your inexperience but still not too bad

the vote goes to McBeats for better punches, wordplay and all around better verse

yall hit this up w/an honest vote, gettin mad slept on

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