aight...

LI... your structure prolly is wut i think killed you da most... i think you had da lyrics... but you really didn't catch da rythm of da flow... punches were ok.. not anything to stand out-ish.. overall not to bad tho...

out of 10 i give you 7.3-- <---structure--->

PP.. pretty good... i like how you tried to keep ppl reading with a lil intencity...... punches were a lil better... good structure.. easy to read and get your text style... good job..

out of 10 i give you an 8.3

Vote: Perfect

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