Whoa...

ok, Knowledge - is that an alias? style seems remarkably familiar...
but anyway I like the way you spit. Too many multi's for my taste, but you seem to work them into a nice format to set up decent punches. Advice - most cats on the site won't fell that style, change it now and you'll have a better record. Or you can stay stuck on it and take the losses with pride until you eleavte enough to hold your own, but let me tell you you're gonna get hated on for that format. I liked it.... witty and rhyme scheme was excellent.... BUT battles are about punches.

so...

Dizzy - basic structure we always see on RB, so nothin wrong there... but you're missin the punches! where's the punches at? Personals? basically you need to focus and elevate, you have potential but not showin much here. Disappointing really..

vote goes to Knowledge (Knowledge - if Dizzy would have came harder he could have merked you cuz of that style you spit, but you held this one down nice).

pz

yall hit this up w/ an honest vote, gettin mad slept on

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110264

thanks