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Old 01-28-04, 08:12 PM   #11
MADEvil...
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LYTBLAQ
Lyric bust flows, but he chose the wrong rival,
he wouldn't bust a dope verse wit a firework in a bible,
lol nice punch 2/3
this kid coulden't come hard wit concreat on his dick,
the lyrics he spit, are sick, they havin numonia fits,
this was ight.. your set up was weak tho.. 1/3
couldn't "bust a tight lyric" wit a dildo's stuck up his ass,
tryin to put me on blast, while all he spit is trash,
ight.. could have had a better punch 1/3
and I'll gladly show him what the truly simple fact is,
an eplietic fit coulden't shake off all his wackness,
that was coo.. 1½/3
we can see how fake you are, your just a faggot imposter,
the crew you say you from don't got you on their rosters,
lol nice ass personal.. 2½/3
how dare you think you can see, or even get wit this,
insane jokers should have known you ain't no lyrisest,
that was ight.. nothin hard.. 1/3
tell ya homie 'virginoso' he can get off da nuts too,
kill you klean wit deez lyrics, see how dey cut through,
weak.. ½/3
IJL must have had a bad day, lettin you in,
from dis day forward, the'll neva get a-na-va win,
that was ight.. weak wrold play tho.. ½/3

10/24 42%
this was an ight spit.. some lines were not needed.. should have hit more wit personals.. cuz that one personal might just win this battle lol nice shit..

lyric
Bitch you talk mad shit in bitchslapped, but I jus LYT ya ass up
Ya could be makin porn, cause ya blow as well as you suck
lol nice man.. but could have worded the 1st line better.. 2/3
I roll this Herb into an L, look at BLAQs thin frame bend
Created two fuckin alias so he could say he had a friend
lol nice shit man.. 2/3
Reppin that BLAQOUT crew in ya sig, guess they movin nowhere
Like retards playin sports their expectations must be lower
dont really rhyme maybe in a audio.. sorry couldnt get past the fact that it dont rhyme.. ½/3
Your rhymes aint worth my trouble, Comin with da whackness
Fuckin newb, I merked you, I dun care about ya Blaqness
ight.. 1/3
Like the AA program fo alcoholics you need ta take 10 steps
And you'll still be under me, with regrets, beggin fo repents
blah.. ight... 1/3
Comin at me wit played rhymes, you run a basic show
The shit you spit is illiterate, like STDs I bust ill flows
weak.. 1/3
Watch who you call out next time, ya got more than you deserve
I ripped ya insides out, rematch nah now you dun got the nerve
ight.. 1½/3

9/21 43%
yo shit was startin off hott then died down..

Text Standards
Punchlines - Lyric
Multis - none
Flow - tie
Creativity -tie
WordPlay - none

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Lyric

This battle was ight.. most weak.. but ight none the less.. stay up and return ta fav.. check the battles in my sig..

MADEvil...