wow, lilt change up ya struct....its to hard to read.. ya punches were aiight but nothin special. try to add metas in them to make them more complex, personals do that too.

amp. ya had a overall decent verse wit some good punches, but your struct was also bad with streatched lines...cut them down a bit and you dont need // on the end

but overall - amp took this cuz of his punches

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