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Old 01-28-04, 09:36 PM   #18
TheUnderRated
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E-yo, u stupid fucka, you try to sound like ur ass is black//
But the only freakin' quality I see in your ass is wack//
^hmmm well thats a missed punch with weak vocab...
The sufficient skills needed to test me you're ass seriously lacks//
Cause findin' my rhymes is like findin' needles in a black haystack//
^ok not a bad meta the haystack is black though lol
Guess who's back? Oh, it's that fuckin' Eminem wannabe//
Soulfire right now is more gangsta than ur ever gonna be//
^well thats not really a punch its more filler
My rhymes flow like da Nile, drivin' a path straight thru ur verse//
I put this dumb bitch in denial, face the facts, ur rhymes are worse//
^well its an Ok meta but the punch fell of drastically
You think you are Slim Shady, whitey, no one will stand up for you//
Cause they automatically recognize the winner, and bitch it ain't you
^this is a simplistic closer work on your vocab.....


dawg its no question im ill-wit-the-mic, 10-1, and nothins gonna stop me from killin-dis-dyke/
no need to stress im just chillin-tonight, u betta question if u up for dis, cause r u really willin-to-die?/
^this is nice multis....the punches are weak though....
dawg u just a "dull"-emcee, ya punches r "curved", u claim u got it "locked", but u must have forgot the "whole-key"/
u havent battled so long ya souls-covered-in-debris, but in ya "avy" is the only "fire" people-can-see/
^ok this is good punchin nice multis.....stop the quotes and the dashes...
this guy acts like hes so-wise, u bring all ya shit, but when u gotta show skils, u just got "no-supplies"/
this dude blows-guys, and when u find out this guy has gotten half of wins from dqs its no-surprise/
^nice punches ...don't talk about him blowin guys....thats just dumb....
im one of the devilish-few, i spit fire, and u act like u tough, like some kind of rebel-but-it-aint-true/
dawg let me put it in perspective, on a keyboard im just like a "2", cause honestly dawg, im just a "level-above-U"/
^well then this is ok ...the punch is missing but its a ok meta.....
im leavin ya sittin-pissed, cause u tryed to "catch" my rhymes, but u must have forgot to "get-ya-mit"/
so keep spittin-ya-shit, cause literally thats all it is, so do us all a favor and just start slittin-ya-wrists/
^well thats not nice...jk fine punch ....FIX YOUR FUCKIN STRUCTURE>>>^^^^^
winner yo what up.....