U ignorin Than Go To Sleep Bitch, I'm hold more shellz Than Seashorez//
What i need to Creep For?, Just Release Four at This Whorez//
whack, no punches or nuthin
I Scare Setz, Cuz I hold bitchez down like Hair Netz//
Whorez Cannot Beat Us, Me Myself N I, Leavin u Porportioned Like Fetus//
weak
Cut Up, 3 Stripez on ya Chest like u Endorsed By ADIDAS//
My Force iz my Heataz, u copied my game, and shit u Stenciled It//
played
But when this 9 Bang, You filled wit more led than Pencil Tips//
That’z tha End of Diz, Make sho u duck down when It Get Dark//
pencil shit is mad played
When my Tecs Spark, I hit Tha Spot like I’m Shootin out Checkmarks// (I'm on Point)
Cuz Endless Killin fillin this Pretensious Villian//
no need to explain, fucks the flow up
Aint no way to Go back, this Zig Zag N Weed won’t End This Fillin//
Step Up, see how Fast You will, spill out tah the ill//
Clear Sticky shit Up Like my Guns filled wit Vagisil//
once again played


MAD add cuts to hand, like stickin ya fingers in a metal fan...
try and refrain from using ya own name in your flow
lost Structure man, ya shits all over the place like dust n sand//
An i have no time or patience for wackness, so im smackin this phony...
Till he lie flat on his back, down for the count like draculas homies //
creative
cuz Like sex, My text A-pills, but yours just Lacks the Skills...
Im hard to kill, got you jumpin in holes like Iraqie fields//
first line is mad played, second line is ok
ya Punches so old you hittin nothin but dust like Holly Filed..
retire you must, cuz ya text loosin heat faster than oatmeal//
blah
and gettin a load shot in ya mouth is the only time your full of Illness...
if we fought, and you heat seek ya punches, youd probably still miss//
played, cum shit is mad played

[b]get rid of the //. A lot of ya lines were played. Overall Mad gets this. Better punches and more creativeness.

PLease take the time to vote honestly. I took the time for you http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110513