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Old 01-29-04, 12:57 AM   #15
ak-mixa
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Posts: 341
From: Down South
IP:

I enjoyed watching a newb batle a flyweight and it was good to a certain climax.

Salt shaka had a killer opener and straight closer, punches alright, but what I like about dis kid is dat he has potential and da creativeness on his punchlines like dis below. elevate your structure and flow and dats what you need because your a witty one already.

U may be a psycho wit da mic,But I left u lyrically insane//
You dont stand a chance, my lyrics decenigrate ya cell membrane//

as for LyricallyInsane1 you didn't have a good start which made me say what da hell and da punches weren't hitting and didn't connect at all most of da times. It looked like you underestimated your opponent and took him waaaaay too lightly. Improve your wordplay, punches, and metaphors and you'll be straight jus keep elevating.

!!!GOOD BATTLE BOTH OF YOU!!!

vote= SaltShaka ( reasons are explained above)

vote on ma battle (AK-mixa vs. Cashvillin) below is da link.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109978
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