IP:
this was good man...i just saw it and ya structure really Surpised Me...i think it has changed alot...i thought ya Flow in this was good and i think thats one of ur strong Points....your vocb is alright and i think that u could use a litle work on it...Like C man said u got good multis in there which i thought fitted this piece well....wordplay was also alright which doesnt need as much work on...man this was a reall nice keep emm droping man it was a good read.....PeacE.....
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