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Old 01-29-04, 01:10 AM   #17
ak-mixa
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From: Down South
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Another pretty good battle i'm gonna have to vote on.

Killer Emcee had some good punches, metaphors, but lacked a little originality because dem I fuck your mama lines are played out as fuck, next time man try focusing jus on him and no one else, but overall you did good and keep elevating.

favorite line:
he dope?!..dis ni99a duz more "biting" than Mike Tison in da ring
after i knock him wit mah punch he'll b on hiz knees, praisin' hiz king

Underrated had some pretty hot unique rhymes da were LOL like hell, da punches were damaging bad which da structure coulda been a lot better, but both did o.k.
but Underrated striked back much... much... harder than Killer Emcee. Work on ya structure and keep elevating nigga.

vote=Underrated (reasons explained above)

place an honest vote on ma battle (AK-mixa vs. Cashvillin) at da link below.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109978
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