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Old 01-29-04, 01:27 AM   #10
Holmes Jr.
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This was nice and good flow, vocab almost seemed to lack a bit at times but overall it was good, nice use of multis as well. Love, chicks and all that stuff seems to be a played topic but you sure as hell did it well 7/10
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