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Old 01-29-04, 02:42 AM   #12
cutastraphe
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aight...ideal nice structure and flow, good scheme, kinda sounded like a freestyle thouh and you didn't have very hard disses. J-dilla nice flow and scheme, good structure, you came out swingin threw some punches not real hard ones either but harder then ideal's. vote-j-dilla

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I wreck minds best lines with my text rythmes
Thinking you’re the best but u no tupac or no techn9ne

aight not bad, good flow, and we no hell no he aint neither one of them..lol

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Compute: Your score minus one, what does that equal?
You dying in round one, and next comes the sequel.

hmm, nice wrdplay, good flow, not a bad punch

overall: both had good flow, vocab and schemes, but the harder punches is what wins battles, and j had them. Ideal try to use some more punches in ya spit, do sum homework if u have to get sum personals cuz they help allot.

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