this bitch thought he was tourney bound
but im the stud movin to the next round
Man, LoL no..... Im sorry but do ya knowfor sure he isnt dropping? not much here
cause i got ill flow and im runnin dis show
im just like a bro, and this guys skills is low
follow through was sort of a punch
no need to try cause ive already won
hes startin to run, but im havin fun
Um, well ya he dropped so this comes off weak
cause im just ill and im movin on
check dis con, ill start to mow a lawn
filler
this bitch sucks ass and raps like he smokes grass
cause im fast wit the mic, and this fag wont last
filler

Over all this was a key due to you expecting a no show... I would have rather wasted a verse that took some more effort than putting a minute key up naw mean?


Expectin a no show..But Yo Ho my Jabs an Punches got u guessin..
Put up wakness cuz he expected Wakshit but i aint Your Reflection..
decent opener... Sort of feeding off his verse, but alright personal off his expection
Next Bitch,U keyed ya verse in a Second..
Advancin?naw Chances are leening to Slim Wayz..
started losing flow here.. follow through could have helt more of a punch. set could have been more directed
Im a" dope head "Twistin blunts..Ya verse are Punch Free Like Minute made..
Wick rayz got u seein the lite follow it u mite just see the Gates..
smutli here coulda came better
Wait,
Your on jenny Craig But still considered a Lite weight..
I cud Tear u apart or save my punches for the head left disconected.
concept is sorta played... the follow through needed more of a punch and directiong.. the metaphor is ok
seen Kids that are 217-7
But Your 21-7 wut a vet,Considered as ya overall net Record..
Hopefully these vet lines got u thinkin twice before postin Garbage Weak-An Wak..
personal here is decent.. punch could be more
Only Wednesday,
thouhgt id no show but i bet ill Beat u Before the weekend pasts.
the eneding is ok.. needed more

Over all your verse needed more direction with harder punchs and metaphors.


Didnt really do the best run downs here due to the fact Yo What Up posted a key verse.

Vote- Luminary Te-X-t
He came with better punchs and metaphors on the simple fact that his oponent posted a keyed verse assumininghe wasnt got to post.

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