Your flow isn't tight and "Niggas" don't hate that.

You need to do something on an actual topic.. No one wants to read a "Super iLL off the dome internet text freestyle".. You must have something in your life you want to speak out for/against.. Something to get off your chest anonymously? It's quite a good outlet if you use it.

Self proclaimation =

Anyways it was meager at best and you need to lose the "/" at the end of your lines. . There is no need for that. . Don't try and include punchlines in your open mics.. Especially wack ones at that.

Elevate. zp.

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