I liked both of ur verses, but...

Smiley: Ur verse was good. I liked ur metas and personals. Okay punches and all. Nice creativity. Keep elevatin'.

Kilo: Ur verse was good. I liked ur metas and personals, but some of ur punches seemed kina indirect to me. Good creativity. Keep elevatin'.

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